This is a poem written by my friend: when I read it I thought that it needed some tlc, but that it had some nice potential, and was a more optimistic take on things than the sort of stuff I have been writing and avoiding posting lately.
Under Construction
I’m tearing myself apart,
and pulling myself together.
But it’s harder than it looks,
and I know I could do better.
Trying to amend my faults,
and fix up all my woes.
And I know I just can’t stop,
until this feeling goes.
By M.W.D. Lewis 15/10/09
2 comments:
Wow! Thank you for featuring this, it's awesome. It does need a little more work and I'll see to it after NaNoWriMo!!
Like the poem. The simplicity of it is a nice contrast to the complexity of falling apart.
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